We’re getting close here.
I’m slightly happier with the action in this chapter, for all I threw it out in a few hours. With an Imgur break. It’s not fantastic, but it’s better. It’s certainly better than Eirika’s Story. Oh, Eirika… “we fought hard, and we won! Yay!” that’s how she sees all this fighting. Blah.
Going to practice for a bit, and then when I return… perhaps the last two chapters? That would be awesome. All right! Here goes.