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FFXIV: Rousing Spirits

Is it just me or have interpersonal relationships suddenly become easier between my characters starting last chapter? Like they actually like each other? Y’know, only an expansion and a half late. : P

I took out the cyclops because I don’t think it really adds anything except make Thancred miss the climax of the fight for no reason. : P

Chapter 35: Unraveling Hopes

 

Chapter 36: Rousing Spirits

Achiyo, Rinala, R’nyath, and Vivienne went down for breakfast in Fortemps Manor several days later and found Count Edmont reading a notice as he ate. “Ah, good morning to you all. Ser Aymeric has news for us. I shall call upon him after I have breakfasted, would you care to join me?” Continue reading

FFXIV: Unraveling Hopes

So you probably guessed but this year’s NaNoWriMo is FFXIV fic! My goal is to get to the start of Stormblood.

Vivienne’s cosplay looks great! Photoshoot forthcoming! I had many moments where I was forced to improvise but I think I captured the five million details well enough. With this massive project done, I can… play more videogames, I feel I’ve neglected them.

I have been replaying FFXIV a bit as I mentioned before, and I have an alt in the middle of 2.x, and I’m noticing a few things I didn’t before – I think one reason why Minfilia chose to help the Domans and not the Ala Mhigans is that there are only so many Doman refugees to take in, their numbers are limited and finite. Ala Mhigo is right next door, so there can always be more Ala Mhigan refugees. (I’m also coming up with new theories and questions about the Echo, so I hope I can keep playing until EW this time.)

You may notice some dialogue is different from how it currently appears in the game. I’m going by how it was when I played it!

Chapter 34: The Void Ark

 

Chapter 35: Unraveling Hopes

“Our unknown third party was simply there… and then not there,” Krile had said about Minfilia’s disappearance beneath Ul’dah. Rinala shivered. She knew more or less all the details – the ‘unknown third party’ was Minfilia, and the place she had disappeared to was Hydaelyn’s side in the aetherial sea, but the way Krile had worded it… was creepy.  Continue reading

FFXIV: The Void Ark

Work upon Vivienne’s cosplay proceeds apace! I’m not done yet, though. There’s so much to do! I’m nearly done the main part of the chestplate, but there are so many little details! And then there are the gloves and boots, which have a bit less detail, and I’m still debating if I want to make a helmet or not. I don’t think I will have time before Halloween for a helmet, but for the cosplay in general.

This chapter is a little bit fillery, but hey my characters wanted to talk! Also there are sure a lot of people with swords in the 24-man, but obviously the PLD or GLD characters who are not Achiyo are not tanking.

Also I didn’t consciously decide to write the spooky ship during spooky month, but hey this works out!

Chapter 33: A City in Chaos

 

Chapter 34: The Void Ark

“So how was your honeymoon?” R’nyath asked Kekeniro as the Warriors of Light and Y’shtola appeared around the aetheryte on Azys Lla.

“We can speak of that later,” Aentfryn said. “Should we not begin by summarizing the situation?” Continue reading

FFXIV: A City in Chaos

Wow, it’s been nearly a year since I uploaded a FFXIV chapter? How!? I got stuck on these BRD quests but I felt they were important. (also work, yadda yadda, lack of energy, yadda yadda, cosplay yadda)

Gordon Lightfoot passed away since I last posted. I didn’t know his music as well as I should (and I should since 1: it’s gorgeous and 2: I’m Canadian), but I did know it a little bit, and I submit for your consideration Song for a Winter’s Night as a good song for Aymeric shippers.

I’m working on a Vivienne cosplay for Halloween! I tried to do it last year, starting with Cronus, but Cronus is a huge complicated scary project and I was still pretty burned out. I seem to be doing much better this year, I already have the chestpiece cut out of craft foam.

Chapter 32: Thancred

 

Chapter 33: A City in Chaos

“If you ask me, it sounds like naught but a faerie tale,” Guydelot said, folding his arms and glaring off at the gate of Tailfeather. “I’d wager that ‘heavens’ is just a metaphor for a natural phenomenon. We’ve hit a dead end – I say we return to Gridania for now and look for other avenues.” Continue reading

FFXIV: Thancred

Somehow, I wrote a chapter. It took a long time because I am chronically overstressed with work right now, and future chapters will probably continue to be slow (until the winter holiday season? I might write faster then.). But now that I put Scrivener on my tablet, I can write in comfy places, and even times when I’m not at home. It’s nice to be able to do that.

But exciting things have happened! First of all, Aentfryn talked to me and we worked out a character arc for him! I’m so glad, he felt a little pointless until now. I had wanted a contrasting character to all the young hot excitable heroes when I made him, but since he didn’t openly want any of the same things that they did, it was tough for me to figure out what his deal was. But he has an arc now, and that’s why we’re starting this chapter with him, to celebrate!

Another thing is that despite the game plot being absolutely thrilling and me wanting to show you the impact it has on my PCs, I need to not forget to focus on the relationships between the PCs, and between the PCs and NPCs, above all else (and not just the romantic ones). I want more bonding moments between all of these people! They’re friends, right?

Vivienne gear update! Yes, she is beginning the Anima Weapon quests this chapter, but also – I have decided that she’ll get her “character design” Omicron chestpiece at level 70, when you’re supposed to get it, so at this point in the story she should be wearing something like the High Allagan chestpiece, that’s also a pretty sexy tank chestpiece.

I’ve been playing through ARR on a new character and I’m really excited at the changes I’ve seen so far. Toto-rak isn’t the worst dungeon ever! Copperbell’s new bosses feel better too! The new piñata-less Rhitahtyn battle is so awesome I almost want to go back and rewrite my chapter! Castrum is beautifully streamlined! However, despite the mechanics of the new Lahabread battle being much more exciting, I can’t condone canonically killing (and rezzing) the WoL so soon in the story. We’ve been a zombie this whole time??? No, even if it highlights Laha’s ancient power and the WoL’s noobness, that doesn’t sit well with me.

Finally, I learned that I actually know more of the ARR voice actors than I thought! For instance, Urianger is the same voice as Fenris from DA2! (and Raubahn is Hawke : O ) And most importantly, Thancred is voiced by Taliesin Jaffe, under an alias in the credits! No wonder I thought he had a sexy voice in ARR! It’s a lot like his Percy de Rolo voice. I like Taliesin’s Thancred better than Peter Bramhill’s Thancred (his is a lot less sassy, imo) so now that I know who it is, I can just think of Percy. : ) Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 38: Perchance to Scheme

Okay now we’re done. EDIT: I rewrote everything for a third time, for reasons explained after the chapter.

Thank you again to Tharash/Aristheron, who allowed me to use his character and mangle his story into something entirely new, who beta-read from Chapter 31 to 33, and helped shape the rest of the story arc strategically, and gave me advice through all these years of writing. He made it exponentially better from my first drafts and inspired me a lot. Without him this final, most original arc would have fallen flat.

Part 37: Ascension

 

Part 38: Perchance to Scheme

It had been six months. Six long months since his Ascension, and yet they had flown by in a tearing hurry. He didn’t want to talk about all the times he’d nearly died again some more, but he was still very much alive, to the disappointment of many people. Some of those people he had eliminated himself, or arranged for their demise, both to get back at them and to make life easier. And every day that he lived, he grew stronger.

Aristheron was still there, and Akuliina, and he found himself working closely with both of them, especially Akuliina. It was… fun. The Empire had had far too many crises in such a short time, crises that the three young Sith had been called on to quell together – to be sure, any nation went through periods of great turmoil periodically, any cursory glance at the past would show that. It was just very good luck for him that he happened to be in power during such a time.

He swivelled his chair so he could look out of the window of his grand office high in the Sith Sanctum, putting his feet up on the right wing of his desk. His hands were steepled across his chest as he contemplated both the never-ending thunderstorm of Kaas City and his next moves. He really didn’t like Darth Aruk over in the Ministry of Philosphy, and the feeling was mutual. But it wasn’t time to pull him down yet. Far better to infiltrate the other Ministries, the other Spheres, and plant resources to prepare for his ultimate goal.

I mean, who really expects the librarian to be the terrorist? he asked himself, inwardly amused at both the over-simplification of his duties and the way they hid his true nature. He rather thought he’d been doing well at proving himself to the Empire, setting himself up as ‘helpful, but not to be crossed’, pretending his only agenda was to learn his place as quickly as possible lest the others kill him for incompetence. Which was a little bit true, but any subservience they detected from him was an act; he’d submit to no one ever again. When he got better at his job, he’d switch his open hidden agenda to bickering with Aruk. Let them think that such a petty rivalry was all the danger he could muster towards them.

His messages inbox beeped in the tone that indicated it was a message from his cult. He almost tuned it out, but after a minute more, turned back to his desk and checked it.

It was a forwarded message… from Ashara.

Hey! What’s up? It’s been a while! I’ve heard you’re keeping busy with Aristheron while I’m away. I hope you’re not being mean to too many people. I miss you, do you wanna hang out and catch up? Maybe on Commenor again? Let me know the next time you’re out that way and I’ll get the Rurouni to stop by! We’ll actually be in the area in a few days, but I know it’s short notice and I don’t know where you’re at and you’re probably stupid busy as usual. But I wanted to take the opportunity to say hi anyway, since it’s been a while. Hope you’re doing well!

Love, Ashara

He flattened his hands against the desk, trying to contain the uncontainable – the spark of Light within him welling up in unexpected joy, cutting through all his dark schemes with a pure happiness and delight that only she could bring out in him, even now. He missed her terribly, and… she didn’t hate him.

Rylee: return message. “I’ll be there in three days.” He sent the message and stood, touching his comm. “Revel. Warm up the Viper. I’m leaving Dromund Kaas.”

 


 

Thank you so much for reading! This story was a massive (300K words) 5-year endeavour, and in many places it went in unexpected directions. If you managed to stick through the whole thing (and I’m guessing you did if you’re here), I’d be interested in your thoughts! Even if it’s been years, I check comments regularly.

So in the previous version of this ‘epilogue’ I received a comment from someone saying it didn’t really feel like the end of the story? And that person is 100% correct, because it’s not the end of the story, but I did a bad job of making it feel like the end of the fic – I think because I still had Ashara/Murlesson soundtracks I wanted to use (Jonathan Young’s covers of Shut Up and Dance and Every Time We Touch, and Disturbed’s You’re Mine), and because I wasn’t planning to write a sequel so I wanted to let everyone know how things were going in Murlesson’s future a bit.

However. I’m now attempting to begin work on writing a sequel. And it’s going to be just as big as this one. Even though it’s annoyingly hard to be ambitiously creative when feeling on the edge of burning out all the time, and I also feel like I need to play all the content so I can fit in my OC story arcs, so it’s going to take a while because ugh I hate playing that game. So if you read the previous version of this epilogue and are wondering where all the content went, fear not! It’s going to get recycled into the new fic (tentatively called The Devil You Know). I’m also working on a Holiday Special, because it’s funny.

(more self-critique: I feel, upon months-later read-throughs, that Act 4 is a bit uneven. It certainly has stakes and tension, but it was difficult to create a through-line of plot, because I decided to have it do a lot of timeskips. I also had a lot of ideas for how to make Murlesson’s life hard, and maybe using ALL of them was overkill on the pacing. So it is what it is, but I’ll be keeping these thoughts in mind next time I write something similar. : D )

Anyway, I’ll see you in an unspecified future time frame with more Sith bois and girls! Murlesson/Aristheron/Akuliina team-up! Cheers!

Devil’s Due: Part 37: Ascension

I’m actually surprised that a few people weren’t sure which companion Murlesson was going to pick to keep and which to put in the Rakata box, I thought it was pretty obvious. ; )

Turns out this is the second-last chapter after all because I always underestimate how long social scenes are going to go. ONE MORE I PROMISE

Part 36: Darth Nox

 

Part 37: Ascension

Thanaton’s body was unmoving where it sprawled, his presence was well and truly snuffed out. The final explosion of his soul had not done much damage, only sweeping a hot, bitter wind over everyone. Murlesson let himself float to the ground and nearly staggered from weariness, as he capped his internal wellspring, pulling his aura back in close – though he wasn’t as careful as usual, what was the point? The whirlwind of rubble collapsed unceremoniously, and the dark swirling clouds overhead dissipated like they’d never been. Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 36: Darth Nox

Soundtracks for this chapter: Scene one gets a blend of two of the best soundtracks from Corpse Party, The Nightmare of the School Years (which I used before but it’s still good) and Chapter 5’s Main Theme. But the final fight is upon us! I’ve used so many different tracks for this fight I have a whole playlist just for this one fight. The first one on there was The Stains of Time from MGR (for some reason I’ve always felt like that was the most edgey teenage boy song on the OST), which in a way was a callback to the very first soundtrack of this story, from the very first chapter, being I’m My Own Master Now also from MGR. Then over time the playlist also expanded to include Angel of the Dark by Aviators as a callback to when Murlesson first showed power and mysticism in public (although in this scene it actually goes at the end), and then Change the World by Man With a Mission, and finally a song which I think is called something about ParadiseLost (Belial Avatar BGM) from Granblue Fantasy (I felt “let me feel the power that could rip me to shreds” was a pretty appropriate chorus line!). I hope it lives up to the hype I’ve built!

Part 35: Paradigm

 

Part 36: Darth Nox

 

Bursting through the door down from the roof, he nearly crashed into Revel. “Had a fight with Shara, huh?”

“Shut up,” Murlesson growled, storming past him at a run. “I don’t have time. She’s in trouble.”

“So you’re going to rescue her anyway, of course,” Revel said, turning to jog after him. “She’s really got you wrapped around her finger.”

Murlesson turned, eyes raw and blazing. “Don’t you talk about either of us like that.”

“Hey, don’t worry about it,” Revel said. “I’m surprised you haven’t had more fights-“ Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 35: Paradigm

Sorry to the people who don’t like this sort of drama? (and yes I threw in a bit about my obsession with urban planning lol – in my opinion, Corellia in-game has the perfect aesthetic for Corellia, it’s just how I imagined it… but from an immersion standpoint, it doesn’t look like a place I would want to live. BioWare is really, really bad with big maps and it’s particularly bothersome to me here. There’s no draw to exploring because every bit looks the same as every other bit. (the MMO with the best, most explorable maps, imo, is probably GW2.))

 

Part 34: Accelerate

 

Part 35: Paradigm

The tunnels were dark and he’d lost all sense of direction. A full battalion of enemy soldiers led by Lord Kogni, a fraction of the attacking force but still enough to give him a bad day, had pursued him into the depths of Coronet City and were right behind him as he ran. Continue reading

Devil’s Due: Part 34: Accelerate

Mannnnn I know it’s been so long since I had a chapter, but first I burned out on work real bad this year, and then Tharash/Aristheron came over to hang out for 3 weeks and we drove all over my province and it was really fun but I didn’t start feeling creative again until I’d recovered from that. So that’s why it’s taken so long. And unfortunately, my beta-reader is too busy right now to check everything, so I just have to hope it’s good enough like I did with the first 3/4 of this story. XD (He still helped talk me through some of the tricky plot bits though!)

Originally there was going to be another defecting Sith at the end of this chapter, just to show Thanaton losing his grip on his underlings, but that was one step too complicated for me.

Three more chapters until we’re done, let’s go! (and I’m not just saying that, they’re already mostly written, let’s really go!)

 

Part 33: Labyrinth

 

Part 34: Accelerate

Ashara met him back at the park, alone. “Are you okay? You met Thanaton, didn’t you? I sensed your feelings.” She frowned. “Still do, actually, now that I’m close to you again. What happened?” Continue reading