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Fire Emblem 7: Rekka no Ken (Blazing Sword) fanfiction

Rekka no Ken: Chapter 9: A Grim Reunion

EDIT: this chapter is actually much longer because I decided to indulge in my favourite thing – characters yakking about random things that are important to them! Which is of course important for character development and stuff.

One more to go! Tomorrow! Also Salir has chosen a theme song and new art, run for your lives. D:

(Astebreed on Hard is HARD. : P )

 

Chapter 8: Vortex of Strategy     Chapter 10: The Distant Plains

 

Chapter 9: A Grim Reunion

 

The next day dawned grey and rainy as they broke camp in a hollow of the hills. Ceniro packed up his bedroll and helped Wil and Matthew disassemble the small tent they had shared since Araphen. Digging a hunk of less-than-fresh bread out of his small pack, he began to munch on it.

“So you’re Ceniro the tactician, hmm?” Salir said, popping up beside Ceniro; he yelped and almost dropped his breakfast. “You’re cute! You have a great voice, did you know that? Especially when you’re being all commanding!” Her eyes were bright despite the earliness of the hour, and her smile was wide despite the rainy weather.

“Ah- um- ah-”

She giggled. “And bashful, too! Ooh, who’s the archer with the big smile? I like him. My darling Sain has been introducing me to everyone, but I haven’t met everyone yet! Ooh! That monk with the long blond hair, Lucius, I think his name was, is very beautiful. I bet he gets all the girls!” She giggled again.

“Er, Salir, I, um…”

She winked at him. “I’m just messing with you. Oops, Serra’s coming this way! She doesn’t like me, I think. Something about ‘there can only be one cute girl in camp’? I gotta run, catch you later!”

After breakfast, they journeyed rather slowly through the rain back in a northeasterly direction. Lyn, Kent, Florina, and Rath had gone on ahead; Sain had given Lyn his horse to give them even more speed. Ceniro was not expecting much trouble; Lundgren might think he had driven them away. The tale Salir and Anastasia told of being abducted from their very homes by the marquess’s soldiers was chilling, however, as was the idea of their being used as hostages. Anastasia worried for her husband, wondering if he was all right too. Salir was less worried for her parents, since they were less directly connected to Sain. Sain’s parents… they didn’t know.

Sooner than they had expected, they met Lyn and her three companions returning two days later, when they had almost reached Kathelet Town. She was in high spirits, and gathered them all to tell her news.

“Good news,” she said. “Eliwood has sent messengers to the surrounding cantons, but he assured me they would almost certainly remain neutral in our struggle with Lundgren. We went to Marquess Kathelet directly, of course, and she was reserved but polite. I don’t know if it was Eliwood’s influence or not, but the fact remains that Lundgren will not have reinforcements from anyone – unless he asked for them weeks ago.”

“Of course, Lord Eliwood can’t aid us himself, to be fair by this arrangement,” Kent said.

“But he’s certainly done more than enough, and that should be a great weight from Ceniro’s mind,” Lyn said, smiling at him. “We’ve limited the size of the engagements from here to Castle Caelin. It would be nice to wait for answers, but it would take a couple weeks, and I need to try to save my grandfather from his poisoning if possible…”

“Then what are we waiting for?” Sain cried. “Let’s head back immediately! I swear upon my sword you shall see your grandfather as fast as we can march there!”

“Thanks for the horse,” she said. “You’d better take her back, now, so you can impress your fiancée by charging into battle and all that.”

“It’s like you read my mind, Lady Lyn!” Sain said, grinning.

 

They headed back south as quickly as they could. Ceniro was afraid Lundgren would reinforce the road they had taken before, so they chose a different road, a slightly longer one, but a much less defended one.

They had about regained their previous progress and were taking an afternoon’s break to rest the horses. Lyn had wandered off with Florina, looking ahead this time instead of back, and the wind tugged at her long green hair and the tails of her skirt. Ceniro watched her, fascinated by the way the silken strands carried in the wind.

Matthew wandered up beside him, and Ceniro blinked, distracted – he was juggling five apples at once. It was almost – almost – more interesting than Lyn’s hair. “She’s certainly beautiful,” Matthew said casually.

“Yes, she is,” Ceniro said, managing not to stutter. It was a common opinion Lyn was beautiful, wasn’t it? “And so strong.”

“And brave, and spunky, and generous, and determined, and and and,” Matthew said, affecting a dreamy sigh even as his apples flew through the air in rhythmic patterns. Ceniro blinked at him, blushing hard. “Oh, don’t be so bashful, young man! It’s quite clear to all of us how you feel.”

Ceniro’s eyes opened wide. “All of you?”

“Yep,” Wil said, leaning on Ceniro’s shoulder on the other side. “At least me and Sain and Matthew.”

“And Kent,” Sain put in, coming up with Kent. “We’ve discussed it a couple times.”

“What are you talking about?” Kent asked, looking from Matthew to Ceniro’s red face and Sain’s face-splitting grin.

Ceniro put his face in his hands. “Nooo, why are you telling me these things?”

Matthew caught one apple in his teeth, tossed the other four to the other four men, and reached up to take a proper bite out of his apple. “Because listen, I’m pretty sure she likes you back.”

Ceniro had almost failed to catch his apple, and at Matthew’s statement, almost dropped it again. “Oh, come on.”

“I do not think any of us except Florina would be able to say for certain, but I do get the sense that she enjoys your company,” Kent said calmly.

“Wait, why are we all watching her?” Wil asked suddenly. “Totally not weird at all, not when they turn around…”

“And Wil over here likes Florina, so he’s got a good view right now too,” Sain said, ruffling the archer’s hair, and it was Wil’s turn to blush and grin.

“Well that’s as obvious as the sun rising in summer,” Matthew said. “The difference is, Wil can take care of his own business, I’m sure. Ceniro needs help.”

“No I don’t!” Ceniro protested. “I need you to not talk about it so loud, she’s going to find out!”

“Oh, don’t worry, she’s fine,” Sain said. “Besides, wouldn’t that be a good thing? Women like to know they’re admired. Now, as the only one among you who has a girlfriend, let me instruct you in the fine art of wooing said women-”

“Sain, shut up,” Kent said. “Ceniro, please don’t worry about it. We know you love her, it’s true. It’s easy to see why. But I suspect the reason Matthew inadvertently assembled us was to let you know that you have our support.”

“And to encourage you,” Matthew put in, tossing away his apple core. “I mean, are you going to even say anything before she fights Lundgren?”

“Ten gold says he doesn’t,” Wil said cheerfully.

Matthew shook his head. “Too easy.” He grew a little more serious. “There is another thing to consider, which is… You’ve done brilliantly to this point, but things change when you get involved with someone – someone who puts themself in danger. Especially when you can’t do anything directly to help. How is that going to work out for you? If there was no other way out, could you send her out to fight to the death?”

“So you’re saying he shouldn’t ask her before she fights Lundgren?” Wil asked under his breath.

Ceniro glanced up at Lyn’s distant figure again. Now she was laughing at something Florina had said, her shoulders shaking, and Serra was coming to join them. “All of you… all of you are my friends. I don’t want to see any of you dead.” He paused. “Before my journey took this turn, I hadn’t really considered what it meant to have friends to put themselves in danger for me, to literally fight for me since I can’t defend myself. In my training, it was just… assumed that such an idea wouldn’t really be an issue. I’ve grown and learned so much since then, and I’m much more confident about going into real battle, but the fear of losing someone hasn’t grown any less.”

He glanced up at Matthew, then turned to look at the others. “Please believe me when I say that I’ll fight my hardest to stay out of a situation where any of you are in danger of dying. I already have enough awful visions without letting any of them become reality.” Another brief image of everyone lying still and blood-soaked on an overcast battlefield rose in front of his eyes, and he shook it away.

“I trust you,” Sain said. “You’ve thought about this, clearly.”

“Well, it’s good to know you don’t consider me expendable,” Matthew said, his question apparently answered, and sauntered away. Sain left after a moment as well, whistling.

Ceniro considered his as-yet uneaten apple, and smiled to himself. Here he was, surrounded by these strong and very competent men, and women too, of course, but… they accepted him. They treated him as an equal, despite his background. It was a feeling he hadn’t had often before, and never so universally as now.

“What is it?” Kent asked quietly.

“I’ve never been in such a welcoming group before,” Ceniro said. “There’s always several people who take an immediate dislike to me for no reason. Here… everyone is genuinely friendly.”

Kent smiled. “It’s true. You must have guessed from seeing my mother, but… I am not high-born either. My father is a farmer. Sain, however, is the son of a knight who is the son of a knight… and he is older than me… but he has never treated me as inferior. And Marquess Caelin is just the same. And Lady Lyndis is the same.”

“And I imagine that anyone wanting to join our group would have to be the same, or they wouldn’t want to,” Wil said. “You were at the Academy in Ostia, right? Any noble’s brat can join that. I can see how your life would be difficult there. You should stick with us!”

“I should,” Ceniro said, smiling. “But I’m afraid my feet would wander off again whether I want to or not, sooner or later. But now, I have a question!”

“Shoot,” Wil said.

“More for Kent,” Ceniro said. “I was able to convince you not to call me by any honorifics, but you still call Lyn by them even though she also asked you not to. Even if you’re too understanding to scold anyone else for not doing so, why is that?”

“That is… not because I respect either you or her any less than the other,” Kent said slowly. “But it is my duty to call her by her title, and it is my pleasure to follow my duty. Not because others expect me to, but because I want to fulfil my duty in all things. If she were not my liege-lady, then I could gladly call her by her short name as you do. You can ask Sain, he feels similarly.” He smiled a little. “You should probably be glad that you are not related to a lord, or else I would not give you a choice either, my friend.”

Ceniro chuckled. “I am glad for that.”

“Hey!” Lyn had finally turned and seen them, and was coming over. “Shall we get going again?”

“I think that sounds like an excellent plan, Lady Lyndis,” Kent said, with a half-bow, and went to round up Nils and Salir, who were running around like mad people.

 

The rest of the day passed fairly quietly, or as quiet as it could be with both Serra and Salir in the same company. The next day, however, dawned cold and damp again, and the fog that shrouded everything in grey obscurity did not lift all day.

“This is General Eagler’s estate,” Sain told them in the morning, when the mist should have passed. “It’s often like this…”

“Hang on,” Matthew said. “I hear something… Someone heavily armoured is coming towards us!” A few moments later, Ceniro heard it too – heavy, clanking footsteps on the road ahead.

“Erk, Lucius, be ready,” Ceniro said softly. Sound carried in the fog, and he knew that whoever was approaching had heard their conversation. But the person seemed to be alone, which was good.

A huge, hulking figure appeared ominously out of the fog ahead of them. It was clad in heavy grey armour with the helmet down. “Where is the girl who calls herself Lady Madelyn’s daughter?”

“Lord Wallace!” Sain blurted out; both knights were tense in the shoulders. “I thought you were retired to a farm somewhere! Don’t tell me you’re…”

“Ah, Sain, Kent! Good to see you boys again. Yes, I was, for a while, but I got a little bored, you know. Have you kept up your training?”

“Yes, sir!” Kent said, with a response so quick Ceniro guessed it had been drilled into him ferociously over a great deal of time. “Every day, sir!”

“Is that right? Well, no beating around the bush. Where’s the girl you’re supposed to be escorting?”

“What do you want with her?” Kent demanded, frowning. “She is truly Lady Madelyn’s daughter. You do not believe us oathbreakers? If you intend any harm against her, we shall stand against you!”

“Don’t make me laugh,” said the giant. “I could beat you with both hands tied behind my back. I simply want to ascertain for myself her identity. But if I don’t like what I see, I will end her. I owe Lady Madelyn that much.”

“Enough,” Lyn said, shouldering her way between Kent and Sain’s horses. “I’m right here. But if you attack any of us, you will regret it!”

The giant removed his helmet, revealing a shiny bald head and a pair of twinkling eyes, though they were serious as they observed Lyn. “Such beautiful eyes…”

“I beg your pardon?” Lyn said, still glaring angrily at him.

“I’ve been a knight for thirty years, and if there’s one thing I’ve learned, it’s that no one with eyes as bright and clear as yours can be a deceiver.” The knight knelt on one knee before her. “Lady Lyndis, if you’ll accept this old fool of a knight, I’d like to join your little company of mercenaries.”

Lyn’s mouth fell open. “I’m sorry, what was your name?”

“My name is Wallace, my lady. Lundgren asked me to take you on, but I’m afraid he miscalculated there. This old bull’s loyalty is to Caelin, not to any usurper!”

Sain’s face had lit up. “Will you really? That is fantastic news!”

“Since Kent and Sain vouch for you, I accept,” Lyn said. “Did you know my mother?”

Wallace rose and nodded. “I did indeed. A generous, graceful woman, and your father was a true and honourable man. I can see both of them in you, and I am glad. Lord Hausen will be truly overjoyed to meet you.”

Lyn smiled. “Thank you. That… that makes me happy.”

“What are we waiting for, then?” Wallace bellowed, and Erk and Nils jumped back. “Let’s march!”

“Er, General, if you could keep your voice down a tad,” Sain said. “We are being hunted here! And if you found us, others can find us too!”

“Let them come!” Wallace said jovially. “I’ll take them all on myself! I trained half of them!” He sobered slightly. “Which is regrettable. But a knight must sometimes choose between his heart and his orders.”

“Is General Eagler against us?” Kent asked. “Will his lands be barred against us?”

“Probably,” Wallace said. “There’s only one way to find out!”

“Before we go on,” Lyn said, “we should introduce our tactician to you.”

“A tactician! Very wise of you. Hmm, but there are so many shrimps here! Which one is it, my lady?”

“Here he is,” Lyn said. “Ceniro of Santaruz. He may not be a fighter, but he has a brilliant mind and has led us safely this far.”

Ceniro swallowed, confronted suddenly by two metres and several hundred pounds of man and steel staring intently at him.

“Ceniro of Santaruz, hmm? I’ll have to see what you can do. Go ahead and order me around as you like!” He laughed uproariously.

“He hasn’t changed at all,” Kent said, almost laughing to himself.

“Let’s continue, then,” Lyn said. “We’ll introduce everyone else to you as we march.”

A few minutes later, Rath appeared beside Ceniro. “Bandits are nearby.”

“You’re sure?” Ceniro said, not doubting Rath, just wanting to make sure it wasn’t soldiers.

Rath nodded. “They look considerably less-well equipped than the soldiers we faced before. There is a large group to the north, among the hills, about twenty-five; mostly axemen and archers.”

“Could be an issue,” Ceniro mumbled. “They might not see well enough to shoot well, but we won’t necessarily see them in time to dodge either, and we have so many non-combatants. How long until they’re upon us?”

“About five minutes.”

“Right. I think Lord Wallace will get his chance to shine right away…”

For some reason, Lyn insisted on staying close to Ceniro when he wasn’t directing her to attack axemen. Not that he minded her being near him, although he was still in danger of getting distracted in watching her fight. She was so fluid, dancing a dance without rhythm, her hair swirling after her, her blue eyes flashing with determination.

“I’m glad this is almost over,” he admitted to her when there was a lull in the fighting.

“Oh? Too much excitement for you?” she teased him.

“A little bit, yes. I’d like to know that you’re not being hunted by someone who is supposed to be your own family…”

“Yes, that part is annoying, although I’m more worried about my grandfather’s safety than my own. But you’ve seen how much stronger we’ve all gotten since met in Sacae, right? I’m so glad I came with you on your journey.”

“I-I’m glad we met too,” he stammered. “And we’ll get through the last obstacles t-together.”

“With my sword and your orders, there’s nothing that can stand before us!” Lyn said, smiling, and he reflexively smiled back, which made her smile more.

 

The noise of the fight with the highwaymen had carried; there was no getting around it. Still, Ceniro was rather disappointed when the next bend in the road brought the sight of a barricade across the road, with about forty soldiers bearing every sort of weapon, though mostly lances, and at their head, a dignified-looking older knight in ornate armour.

“General Eagler!” Wallace exclaimed.

“General!” Sain cried.

“And here you are,” the knight said calmly. “I was wondering when you would arrive. I am sorry it has come to this; I never thought the three of you would turn traitor.”

“Who has turned traitor?” Sain said, pointing his lance at Eagler. “Kent and I are following the orders of our liege-lord Marquess Hausen, not his pernicious brother Lundgren!”

“General Eagler, we’ve worked so hard to bring Lady Lyndis safely to Caelin-” Kent began.

Eagler’s horse pawed the ground as he snorted. “And yet you have no proof of the girl’s identity, do you?”

Kent frowned unhappily. “Well, no, but-”

“Just look at the girl!” Wallace said, gesturing to Lyn, who stood tall and looked wary, a hand on her sword. “Can’t you tell she’s Lady Madelyn and Lord Hassar’s daughter?”

“Looks mean nothing,” Eagler said. “I name you traitors all. Prepare yourselves!” The soldiers in the roadblock readied their weapons, and the members of Lyn’s group did likewise.

Wallace shook his head sadly. “Eagler… It’s Nanette, isn’t it? Lundgren has her, doesn’t he?”

“It is irrelevant,” the general said gruffly.

“It is not irrelevant!” Wallace cried. “Come with us, Eagler! We have a first-class tactician here! He’ll save your daughter!”

Eagler closed the faceplate of his helmet. “It cannot be done. But I would sooner die without honour than risk her life. This discussion is over!” The footsoldiers began to advance as Eagler set his lance and spurred his horse to a gallop, straight at them.

Eagler had clearly set up his strategy ahead of time, and was now letting it play out as he had planned with a minimum of interference or adjustment. Ceniro knew the advantages and disadvantages of such a decision, but he preferred to think with the situation, especially since he was not participating in the actual combat and so had the attention for such things. Eagler’s soldiers spread out and as Lyn’s group parted before Eagler, his soldiers began to attempt to flank them.

Ceniro sent Lyn and Wallace to face Eagler and except for the non-combatants, directed the rest of the group to hold back the soldiers, a feat easier said than done with how badly they were outnumbered. The only solution was to be more mobile than the footsoldiers and to use Lucius and Erk’s magic and Wil and Rath’s arrows to direct the soldiers where Ceniro wanted them to go. Dorcas and Matthew were actually the most vulnerable, besides Florina to the enemy archers; Ceniro took a chance and sent her to circle around and attack the archers from the rear through the fog. With a protective spell from Serra in place, she obeyed, while the other soldiers constantly found their paths blocked by fire or a knight’s lance.

Even though the air was cool, he found himself sweating. He’d faced worse, he told himself, both in training and now in real life. But there were so many lethal weapons pointed at his friends… He had to stay calm, avoid giving orders too fast to be intelligible. His eyes darted around the battlefield, from Matthew taking advantage of a distraction caused by Dorcas to take down two soldiers from behind, to where Lucius had just blasted a soldier with light and Kent rode through the afterglow to attack an axeman with his sword. Florina had managed to take down three of the archers, although the fourth eluded her, and she was now engaging in hit-and-run tactics on the forward soldiers.

Lyn and Wallace were still facing Eagler; Ceniro hoped that he would see reason through combat, although his hope was faint after hearing that Eagler’s daughter was a hostage. Wallace had taken Eagler’s charge and turned it aside, and Lyn was taking advantage of the change in momentum to launch her own attack. But Ceniro couldn’t do more than glance at them and trust Lyn and Wallace; the other battle was taking too much of his attention.

Florina shrieked, and Lyn flinched; Ceniro looked up to see she had been struck by the last archer and had fallen from her pegasus, tumbling through the air. Before Ceniro could stop him and send in Dorcas instead, Wil had launched himself forward, eyes fixed on the falling girl, arms outstretched – and in danger of being attacked by a large man with an axe. Ceniro shouted to Rath and Nils, and the large man fell backwards, an arrow in his eye, just as Wil clumsily caught Florina and was flattened by the force of her fall. Serra rushed forward, heedless of danger herself, to heal the arrow wound in Florina’s side; it looked deep, and Florina was unconscious and white as paper.

Even as Florina’s bleeding ceased and Wil sat up, rubbing his tailbone, another cry of pain rang out over the battlefield. Everyone turned to see General Eagler, now dismounted and fighting Wallace sword-to-sword, fall, slashed across the gut.

Wallace immediately knelt, pulling the helmet from Eagler’s head. “Eagler!” Kent and Sain rushed over, dismounting and running with Lyn to Eagler’s side.

“Go… quickly,” the fallen general gasped. “The marquess… knows nothing… of any of this. There’s no illness… only… poison. Please… for Caelin’s sake… and Nanette’s… Lady Lyndis…”

Lyn clasped his hand. “I promise you, we will save her.”

Eagler was silent and still.

The soldiers looked at them, and at each other, and surrendered.

 

A short while later, as Wallace directed the Caelin solders to take Eagler’s body to his estate for burial, Lyn went to Kent and Sain. “What sort of man was he?”

“He was our first teacher, before we trained with General Wallace,” Sain said.

“A just man, honourable, but compassionate,” Kent said. “A fine captain, and a good teacher. I… wish we could have saved him.”

“He would have fought to the death, no matter what we did or said,” Sain said. “He always was stubborn to a fault, too, remember. But… I’ll miss him.”

Wallace approached them. “Eagler was a good man. A brave comrade in battle, a faithful friend, and a true knight. He did what his honour demanded.”

Lyn was silent a long moment, looking up the road, where the mist was just beginning to thin out as it climbed out of the valley. “May Lundgren never rest peacefully in the embrace of Mother Earth!” she burst out, her hands clenched and chest heaving. “I will stop that man from despoiling this land and her people! Ceniro!”

“L-Lyn!”

“We’re going to bring his wicked dreams down around his head tomorrow, I swear it! Let’s go!”

 

Chapter 8: Vortex of Strategy     Chapter 10: The Distant Plains

Rekka no Ken: Chapter 8: Vortex of Strategy

EDIT: I want to write faster, but I only really have time now to write in the evenings when I’m very tired. I get a little done in the morning, but it’s not enough to satisfy me! Ahhhhh : P
Anyway, I’m not super convinced by this battle, but it’s better than it used to be? Might rewrite this one eventually again. I had so many great ideas this afternoon but I didn’t have time to write them down in any detail, which disappoints me. I think the last two chapters will go well, though.

 

Chapter 7: The Black Shadow     Chapter 9: A Grim Reunion

 

Chapter 8: Vortex of Strategy

 

Whizzzzzzzzzthunk! The ballista bolt narrowly missed Ceniro and Lyn, embedding itself firmly into a tree on their right. Splinters of bark flew everywhere, and Erk ducked.

Ceniro gasped, very glad to be alive.

“My lady!” Kent exclaimed, riding forward to shield them both from further shots.

“Speak of the devil,” Sain said, though his grey eyes were wide with alarm. “Deploying seige weapons… Lundgren’s serious this time.” Continue reading

Rekka no Ken: Chapter 7: The Black Shadow

EDIT: Today I beat Astebreed on Normal, finally (turns out one must not only make prodigious use of the EX attack, but also of the Dash attack to avoid those pesky red lasers), and then I was so pumped that I ran for a whole kilometre in two sections. : D

 

Chapter 6: Siblings Abroad     Chapter 8: Vortex of Strategy

 

Chapter 7: The Black Shadow

 

Kent slipped off his horse and pressed his back to the wall. Sain was on the other side of the entrance. Both knights had their swords in hand, and were only waiting for Ceniro’s signal to slip inside to begin their attack.

Lyn’s Legion had found where Eliwood had rescued Ninian; the bodies of her kidnappers were still lying in the road not far from the fortress they had captured. However, none of them had a ring with them. Matthew, Wil, and Florina had set off, tracking the two men whose tracks led away from the scene of battle.

The companions had been led to a low building in the middle of the forest with no windows and only one door. There was nothing for it but to attack directly. To make matters more uncomfortable, it had begun to rain.

Ceniro took a deep breath. “Let’s go!” Continue reading

Rekka no Ken: Chapter 6: Siblings Abroad

EDIT: One of the challenging things about novelizing a turn-based strategy game is that real life isn’t turn-based, so one has to adapt it from a TBS to an RTS. Which everyone probably already realized, but it’s easier to realize when you’re actually writing it. : P

 

Chapter 5: Blood of Pride      Chapter 7: The Black Shadow

 

Chapter 6: Siblings Abroad

 

When the last dark mage had fallen to Lucius’s light magic, Ceniro explained to the group that Florina had seen a fortress to the south that seemed to have more members of the same sinister group that had attacked Nils just now, and asked her to lead the way.

There were some high hills and a small river in their way, so they were not as quick to reach the fortress as Ceniro had hoped, but after a few minutes of quick marching, a small castle appeared on their right. It did not seem particularly heavily guarded, but still there were only twelve of them, counting Nils, Ceniro, and Serra, who had no combat abilities.

“I hope this is the right castle,” Wil said as they approached. “It would be kind of silly to attack it only to find it belongs to someone completely unconnected.” Continue reading

Rekka no Ken: Chapter 5: Blood of Pride

EDIT: changed the chapter title back to something less generic.

 

Chapter 4: Fire in the Castle     Chapter 6: Siblings Abroad

 

Chapter 5: Blood of Pride

 

With Rath’s help, Lyn’s group were in time to come to the assistance of the Araphen soldiers still fighting in Castle Araphen, although Ceniro had to tell Erk to limit his fire spells. He felt like they still had to make a good impression, after all.

It turned out that the unknown enemies assaulting the castle were indeed sent by Lord Lundgren to delay or kill Lyn before she could get any closer to Caelin. The man commanding the enemies admitted as much, once they cornered him, and Rath ordered him taken into custody rather than killed. Then, while the others helped the soldiers put out the fire and tend to the wounded, Lyn, Kent, Sain, and Rath went to see Marquess Araphen. Ceniro stayed behind. He had no wish to see the proud marquess again, and figured that the marquess would have no wish to see him.

Besides, he could use the time to look at the soldiers he was helping and guess which ones would be coming with them. And if Rath was the captain appointed to come with them… he could work with Rath. Maybe Ceniro hadn’t made the best initial impression on Rath, but he had the feeling the Sacaean man had withheld judgement until Ceniro actually did something. He was far more reasonable than his marquess, at any rate.

It wasn’t long before Lyn and her knights appeared again; Lyn looked furious, red in the face and stalking across the courtyard with quick, angry movements. “Let’s go,” she snapped to her group, and they left the Araphen soldiers to finish up and exited the castle. She didn’t speak until they had left the city.

“What happened?” Ceniro asked anxiously. “Was he angry about the fighting?”

“That, and he said he had no wish to be involved in the ‘inheritance dispute’ between Lady Lyndis and Lord Lundgren,” Kent said. “Although, I think it more likely that he was using that as an excuse…”

“He called me a mongrel,” Lyn growled, her hands clenching at the thought. “He is the most conceited, pompous, arrogant, racist ass…”

“He certainly is!” Sain said. “I knew he was proud, but I did not think he was so ignorant as well! Especially not when his own captain is Sacaean. My lady, do not think of him any more. You are only more beautiful for being born of two different peoples.”

Lyn sighed, letting her anger drain away, and glanced at Sain with the hint of a resigned smile. “And if a woman wants to hear a compliment that’s more than skin-deep?”

Sain blinked, then lowered his gaze and smiled. “You are the heiress of two proud traditions, and your life must only be richer for it. No one who knows you could think any less of you – or any Sacaean – for not having been born in a castle.”

“A lot of people born in castles are dummies anyway,” Wil said. “A lot of them turn out like this marquess.”

Lyn hesitated. “Is my grandfather like that?”

“He is not,” Kent assured her. “I am told he respected your father greatly, and he is not so proud as to prejudice himself against those who are different from him.” He and Sain shared a significant look.

“I’m glad,” Lyn said, smiling. “We’ll continue on, then, without our dear marquess’s aid. With Ceniro beside us, we won’t fall to Lundgren’s- what’s that?”

A horseman was hurrying after them. A moment later, Rath brought his horse to a halt beside them, now dressed in traditional Sacaean clothes. “Lyn.”

“Rath! What brings you here?”

“I’ve resigned in service to Marquess Araphen. I would like to travel with you.”

Lyn’s face lit up. “Oh, that’s great! We’d certainly be glad to have you.”

Wil chuckled. “Looks like our proud marquess hit more nerves than he thought. Sucks to be him!”

 

They were still heading west, and in four days, came to the canton of Kathelet without incident.

“By my estimates, it should take us about a week and a half to get to Castle Caelin,” Sain announced when they crossed the border. “And Salir…” He grinned dreamily.

Kent cleared his throat and Sain sprang to alertness. “And Lord Lundgren.”

“Oh, don’t be such a downer! He won’t be difficult to deal with.”

“Don’t be so happy-go-lucky, Sain.”

“Look,” Lyn said to Florina. “The mountains are so far away now!” A wistful look came over her face. “I wonder if I’ll ever see Sacae again…”

“I know you will!” Florina said. “Sacae is really beautiful. I’m sure you’ll be able to go back often! Maybe you can take your grandfather!”

Lyn smiled. “I would like that.”

Matthew had endeared himself successfully to the group, and spent quite a lot of time with Ceniro; Ceniro wasn’t sure if Matthew was trying to find out more about him, or figure out how to make him less shy. “So you studied with Lord Garlent, hmm? I’ve heard of him; what do you think of him?”

“Um, I guess I would call him strict but fair,” Ceniro said. “He had a very small class of apprentices, and he made sure we got more practical instruction than theoretical instruction… which was good for me, I think, because half of what I do is based on intuition. I can’t do the calculations consciously like he does.”

“So you’re a savant then?”

“I wouldn’t go that far,” Ceniro said, blushing. “No, definitely not. I just have a… a knack for it.”

“I’ve been listening to the others and they say that you care about everyone who fights for you, yeah? That’s different from just having a knack for it.”

“It’s different from being a savant, too,” Ceniro argued. “That’s a different factor entirely, and it has its own shortcomings. It’s why I should never be in charge of a castle like my classmates aspired to be.”

“Right, so it’s the mercenary life for you.”

“I don’t know,” Ceniro said, but Matthew was the second person to have said so in the last month. “I don’t know if I want to sign up with a bunch of mercenaries. I… honestly, I just want to wander around by myself.”

“Oh?” Matthew said, his eyebrow raised. “Seems like you’re perfectly content to travel with this bunch. And as for by yourself… I can think of one or two people you’d like to have along.”

Ceniro blushed furiously. If Matthew was talking about who he thought he was talking about… “N-no, I’m fine on my own, really.”

Matthew grinned. “Suit yourself, then. Oi! Look there!”

Ceniro looked, and saw a young boy running towards them from an inn by the road. The boy was in tears as he ran, and he stumbled up to Lyn with his hands clasped. “Oh, please, please, help me! My sister’s been kidnapped by some awful men!”

“Oh no!” Lyn cried. “Which way did they go? We’ll help you, don’t worry!”

“Lady Lyndis,” Kent began. “Lord Lundgren-”

“Yes, we have time for this,” Lyn said determinedly. “I haven’t let my guard down, don’t worry. But if he’s telling the truth, we must help him.”

“I’m telling the truth, I swear!” the boy said. “Ninian, my sister, was taken away by some men in dark robes. She made me hide, even though I didn’t want to! They’re very strong and I-I can’t rescue her by myself! They’re really tough, but…”

“It’s all right,” Lyn said. “We’re pretty tough ourselves! Just tell us where to go!”

“Thank you so much!” The boy bowed deeply. “I’m so grateful.”

“I would like to help too,” said a light voice, and a young man was hurrying up behind the boy; the man was dressed as a monk. “The innkeeper was… unhelpful and unpleasant, and I could not convince him, but if you are willing to help the boy, I will join you.”

“All right,” Lyn said. “My name is Lyn. What are your names?”

“My name is Lucius,” said the monk, bowing politely. “I have some small command of light magic.”

“My name is Nils!” chirped the boy, bowing again as well. He had pale green hair and crimson eyes, a combination Ceniro had never seen before. “I can… Um, well, I’m a bard, and…”

“What is it?” Lyn asked gently.

“I can play a magic song that will refresh your spirit!” Nils said with a rush. “It’s not like healing or anything, but it will be beneficial, I promise!”

“Very well,” Lyn said. “This is our tactician, Ceniro. He’ll keep you safe and let you help! He’s the best.” Ceniro blushed.

“Which way to these horrible men?” Sain asked, swinging his lance. “Let us rescue your fair sister without delay!”

“I-I think they were going south-east,” the boy said, pointing. “I’m not really sure, though; I didn’t dare follow them by myself.”

“I’ll handle it,” Matthew said. “I’ll scout ’em out!”

“You and Florina head out,” Ceniro said. “Florina, make a sweep from the south-east to the south; Matthew, you go south-east to east.”

“Gotcha,” Matthew said, and began to run off. In a few moments, he disappeared into the hilly fields. Florina sprang into the air and began to scan the countryside.

In only a short while, Matthew was back. “There’s men in dark robes, all right, and they’re coming this way! I suspect they want to capture Master Nils as well.” He looked expectantly at Ceniro.

“We won’t wait for Florina to get back,” Ceniro said. “We’ll set up an ambush. What sort of enemies were they?”

“Some mercenaries, some dark mages,” Matthew said. “About six of each.”

“So many dark mages,” Erk said to himself.

“Don’t worry,” Ceniro said to him. “You’ll be fighting the mercenaries. Lucius and the fastest of our fighters will be fighting the dark mages.” Erk was an anima or elemental mage, and he could be badly hurt by dark magic. Actually, everyone could, which was why… “Lyn, Matthew, Kent, Lucius, head south. Circle around the mercenaries and attack the dark mages from behind. Keep on the move and don’t ever get caught by their spells.”

“How did you know the mercs were in front?” Matthew asked.

“That’s the most logical place for them,” Ceniro said. “The rest of us are going to tie down the mercenaries. Oh, here comes Florina! Get going, Lyn!”

“See you in a bit!” Lyn said with a wave, and followed Matthew into the fields south of the road.

Florina reported a castle to the south, apparently commanded by a man in dark robes. Ceniro positioned his remaining forces in a position that would be good enough to deal with six mercenaries, quickly filling Florina in on what was happening. They’d deal with the castle later.

“Oh, um, I should…” Florina dithered for a moment, clearly wanting to say something but not quite brave enough to get it out.

“You have an idea?” Ceniro asked.

“Um, well, you see, pegasus knights are resistant to magic, because they train in Ilia’s snows, so…”

“Yes, of course, you should go join Lyn. Wait until the battle starts, however, and then you can strike while they’re distracted.”

“O-okay!” she said, and waited nervously beside him. The mercenaries were clearly visible on the road now, and ran towards them. All they could see was Ceniro, Wil, Dorcas, Erk, and Nils, and they shouted triumphantly as they hurried on ahead. Ceniro could see the group of dark mages behind them, and his heart began to speed up; what if they were in range of their spells? Dark mages were not common, and he wasn’t quite sure of their capabilities.

“C’mere, you little brat!” called one of the mercenaries to Nils. “C’mere and we won’t hurt you for running off!”

Nils shook his head. “N-no! Give Ninian back! If you do, my friends here won’t kill you all!”

The mercenaries laughed. “Funny little kid, aren’t you? Get them all! Don’t hurt the boy!”

“Go!” Ceniro shouted, and the mercenaries charged them, dodging Erk’s fireball, Wil’s arrow… but not Rath’s arrow, or Sain’s charge. Florina whizzed by overhead, to where a commotion had broken out among the dark mages with a blast of white light from Lucius, and Lyn’s flickering katana.

Battle had been joined.

 

Chapter 4: Fire in the Castle     Chapter 6: Siblings Abroad

Rekka no Ken: Chapter 4: Fire in the Castle

EDIT: The chapter breaks aren’t really lining up with the old chapter breaks… fewer cliffhangers, unfortunately… and I might have to eliminate a chapter if this keeps up. : P

 

Chapter 3: Bandit’s Pride     Chapter 5: Blood of Pride

 

Chapter 4: Fire in the Castle

 

The remaining bandits had huddled into a defensive formation around their leader, and made no move to attack Ceniro’s group as they moved over the hill and into the thin forest around them. Ceniro was impressed with Florina’s accuracy; she had counted the bandits exactly, even through the trees and from a great distance. But now he could see for himself, and that meant he could issue proper orders.

Not that he had to. “The plan stands. Go!” Continue reading

Rekka no Ken: Chapter 3: Bandits’ Pride

EDIT: I figured out how to get the Astebreed OST out of the Steam files and into my iTunes. : ) Still can’t beat the final boss on Normal, though…

It’s much easier to ‘kill your darlings’ when you’ve had 6 years to realize how awful they actually are. : P …Don’t take this advice for children or anything. >.>

 

Chapter 2: Lyndis’s Legion     Chapter 4: Fire in the Castle

 

Chapter 3: Bandits’ Pride

 

“There’s an old fortress ahead that should do perfectly,” Wil reported, having returned from scouting ahead with Sain for somewhere to stay the night.

Sain shook his head. “I’m still not too sure about it. It’s a musty old tower. It’s probably horribly drafty and uncomfortable.”

Ceniro hesitated. “We can’t afford to camp out in the open tonight, not in this country.”

“I know,” Sain said, “but surely there is a better place we can go…”

“There isn’t an inn for miles,” Kent told him. “There are few villages, as well, and the people in them likely untrusting of us. A tower sounds defensible. We’ll have to make the best of it, it’s getting dark.”

“It sounds fine,” Lyn said. “No one’s expecting marble halls or anything.” Beside her, Florina nodded.

“At least it’s not cold,” Wil said cheerfully. Continue reading

Rekka no Ken: Chapter 2: Lyndis’s Legion

EDIT: I put the Mani Katti back in because it’s kind of important? But then I left out the Band of Mercenaries battle. I might put that one back in tomorrow but right now I gotta sleep, and it’s a foregone conclusion, and no one really gets any character development in it, so I probably won’t after all. I’ll just keep watching Oh My Goddess and writing the next chapters. Also the Astebreed OST is pretty awesome! I mean, obviously.

 

Chapter 1: A Family’s Call     Chapter 3: Bandits’ Pride

 

Chapter 2: Lyndis’s Legion

 

It had been a day, and Lyn came to Ceniro in the morning. “I have a request.”

“What is it?” he asked anxiously.

“It’s nothing important,” she assured him, smiling. “I was just thinking, there is a shrine to the spirits along the road we are journeying on. If we have time, I would like to visit it.”

“Ooh, a shrine?” Sain asked. “That’s to do with the Sacaean veneration of things like the earth and sky, right?”

“It’s nice to see the old traditions respected,” Kent said, smiling a tiny smile.

“Something like that,” Lyn said. “The Sword of Spirits is housed in this one, and I’d like to ask it to bless my journey.”

“Are you sure you don’t want to ride my horse?” Sain asked Lyn for the third time.

“I’m sure,” she said, but without the heat she’d had the day before. Sain was just like that, they were learning.

They continued journeying south, chatting idly on their way. Ceniro felt like he had never met such friendly people, and mostly let the others talk and listened to them; he liked it that way. Kent was rather quiet, and Sain was a bit loud, but they were both good men and clearly the best of friends. Lyn wanted to know as much as she could about her grandfather, and was quickly reassured that he was a good lord, whose people were industrious and prosperous and loved him very much.

They reached the shrine after a couple hours, but when they went to the door, a woman stopped them with frantic gestures. “Please, please help! There are wicked men in there. They mean to steal the sword!”

Lyn’s hand went to her katana. “We have to help!”

“All right,” Ceniro said. “Just let me take a peek inside. Is there a back door to this place?”

“N-no,” the woman said. “But you could break a window, I suppose. The priest won’t mind if you succeed!”

“We’ll succeed,” Lyn assured her. “How does it look?”

“There’s eight of them,” Ceniro said, a little nervous about the difference in numbers. He could do it, just… he hadn’t managed it in training without someone getting hurt. “Some of them have swords, some have axes. The priest or whoever looks all right, he’s in a corner. Not a lot of room to manoeuvre in there, so… Kent, Sain, we’re going to block the door and draw them outside where you can run them down. Lyn, once we’ve gotten their attention, you go for the leader from a window. I’ll… hmm. I think it would be better for everyone involved if I stayed behind the knights.”

“Got it,” Lyn said. “I can take the leader if you keep the rest off my back.”

“I’ll get the door,” Ceniro said. “Let’s go!”

He slammed the door open, and backed away behind the knights immediately. With Sain’s effective taunting, the men in the shrine charged at the knights. When they had almost reached the door, a window shattered and Lyn made a neat dive-roll onto the stone floor, picking herself up again to charge, hair streaming, at the leader.

Said man was livid, almost frothing at the mouth. “How dare you! This sword is by right mine! Back off before I use it on your unworthy skulls!”

“You can’t even get it out of the sheath,” Lyn said. “It has rejected you! Who are you, anyway?”

“My name is Glass! The mercenary feared by the gods! This sword is the only one worthy of my skill!”

“Never heard of you,” Lyn said. “But for attempting to defile the Sword of Spirits, you will be punished!”

“I’d like to see you try!” the mercenary roared. “Fear the swift strike of my sword-”

“Shut up!” Lyn yelled, attacking and forcing him to block.

Ceniro checked in on her, and turned back to directing the knights. Half the other mercenaries were down, and it wouldn’t be long before the rest followed suit. These mercenaries weren’t very good, and their gear old; certainly no match for trained Lycian knights and their well-maintained equipment.

The mercenary fighting Lyn was a bit better, but not as good as she was. His swings were wild, and she slid past his defenses to stab him in the chest. Ceniro flinched. He was glad that his job was not to kill anything. He probably wouldn’t be able to do it.

The priest in the corner slowly got up, and Kent, entering the shrine on foot, hurried to help him while Sain looked around to see if any of the mercenaries had been missed. The priest approached Lyn and Ceniro at the altar. “So the Mani Katti is safe. Thank the spirits… and thank you, young travelers, for rescuing me and the sword.”

“I beg your pardon, but what did you call it?” Kent asked.

“The name of the Sword of Spirits is the Mani Katti.” The priest laid a hand on the sheathed sword fondly. “It has been waiting here for its true master for many years. The one who forged it has been forgotten, as have any past wielders. Now it serves mostly to bless travelers. Is that why you have come?”

“Yes,” Lyn said. “I am making a journey to Lycia and thought I would stop by.”

“Then lay your hands on the sword and may the spirits hear your prayer.”

“Thank you,” Lyn said, smiling gratefully, and reached out, closing her eyes.

But when her fingers touched the sheath, light began to spill out of its top, and a low hum began to resonate through the church. Lyn opened her eyes, jerked her hand back, and blinked as the light faded.

“Oh my,” the priest said. “Could it be…”

“Why is it doing that?” Lyn asked anxiously. “Was it damaged in the battle?”

“I don’t believe that is the cause,” the priest said. “Please, touch it again.”

Again, light began to pour out of the sheath.

“I think it has chosen you to wield it,” the priest said to her.

Lyn dropped it on the altar again, startled, and backed away. “What? No. I couldn’t- I can’t! It’s… It’s the Mani Katti, why would it choose me?”

“If you require further proof, try to draw it from the sheath.”

Lyn swallowed and reached for the sword. It slid effortlessly from the sheath, ringing quietly in her hand, still glowing. Ceniro remembered how hard the mercenary had tried to draw it and nodded.

“I don’t understand,” she said.

“It is the sword’s wish,” said the priest.

“It is remarkable,” Kent said in quiet awe. “Lady Lyndis, I believe the sword is correct. Many legends tell of similar tales. Why should it not happen to you?”

“You look magnificent,” Sain told her. “Like with this sword at your side, nothing can stop you.”

“Very well,” Lyn said. “I accept the wielding of the Mani Katti, and I will use it to defend everyone who needs my help.”

“That is why it has chosen you,” the priest said with satisfaction. “It knows you will use it for good. Now, you have a long journey ahead of you, don’t you? I will not say good fortune be with you, because I know good fortune is with you.”

“Thank you, sir! …Thank you!” Lyn cried, almost overcome with emotion. She took the sheath and sheathed the sword, and put the sheath through her sash next to her old sword, and the glowing ceased. “Let’s go, you three! We have a long way to go!”

“Right behind you, my lady!” Sain cried.

 

They passed into North Bern, heading west on the south side of the mountains between Bern and Sacae. The region was hilly, forested, and generally known to be infested with bandits. But it was the fastest way to get to Lycia, so while they laughed and chatted, they were also on alert.

“So where are you from, Ceniro?” Lyn asked the first afternoon in Bern. “You’ve been very quiet.”

“I don’t mind listening to you all,” he said shyly. “And… well, it doesn’t really matter, does it?”

“Ooh, Master Mysterious over here,” Sain teased him. “From your accent, I would say… Pherae?”

“Santaruz, actually,” Ceniro said, giving up. “I was born in Araphen, but my parents moved to Santaruz when I was young. Something about better taxes… I don’t really know. I was more focused on going to school and helping my father. He’s a carpenter.” After he said that, he braced himself, suddenly realizing that he had just outed himself as a peasant’s son. Lyn was a noblewoman, both in Sacae and Lycia, and surely Kent and Sain were also highborn. Would they treat him differently?

The answer, as it turned out, was no. “Do you have any brothers and sisters?” Lyn asked.

“An older sister, and a younger brother.”

“Are you going to visit after Caelin?” Sain asked. “Santaruz is very close to Caelin.”

“No, not really,” Ceniro asked, and hoped they wouldn’t ask more.

“You don’t want to see your family?” Lyn asked.

Her whole journey was to see her family; it was only natural she would find it a little odd. Ceniro lowered his head, hiding his eyes behind a fringe of light brown hair. “I… had a fight with my mother before I went to Ostia for training as a tactician. She doesn’t like it.”

“Oh, I’m sorry,” Lyn said apologetically, and Sain changed the subject.

“Have I told you yet about my fiancée?” he asked, grinning excitedly.

“You flirted with me relentlessly and you have a fiancée?” Lyn cried indignantly.

“Absolutely,” Sain said shamelessly. “Her name is Salir and she’s from a little village named Coril. All the boys are crazy for her! Just like all the woman fall for my manly charms.”

Lyn rolled her eyes, and Kent exhaled a little more strongly than usual, the ghost of a smile playing over his mouth. “I think there must be a few woman who somehow manage to resist.”

“Every woman is a precious jewel to this earth,” Sain said earnestly, but his eyes were twinkling. “My lovely Salir is, of course, the cutest and most playful of them all.”

“They’re of very similar minds,” Kent said gravely.

“Have you ever heard them have a serious conversation?” Ceniro put in, smiling.

“Once. Maybe. When he was showing her how to curry his horse.”

“Oh, come now, Kent!” Sain rejoined in good humour. “What about the time that… no… wait… Or the time that…”

“Heads up,” Kent interrupted suddenly. “There could be trouble ahead.”

In the valley opening before them, there were a couple clusters of houses huddled beside the road. Too small to really be called villages, they looked rather pathetic. And closest to them… the charred remains of another cluster of huts.

The two knights and Ceniro stared. “We didn’t take this road coming north,” Sain said in a low voice. “This is…”

“We are close to Taliver Mountain,” Lyn said, her shoulders tense. “It is home to the most ruthless band of outlaws in Elibe, the ones who destroyed my tribe and my family. It only took one night… But the rest take their cue from the Taliver.”

“Why doesn’t their marquess do something?” Kent asked. “It’s horrible. Surely any ruler would want to keep the highways safe.”

Lyn laughed shortly. “This is Bern. This valley has no marquess. The settlers hang on as best they can. Travelers fare no better.” She turned her head to look north at the mountains. “Someday I will return, and I will break their axes beneath me like twigs beneath a stallion’s hooves.”

“When that day comes, my lady, take me with you,” Sain said, earnestly serious.

“I will come as well,” Kent said.

“I’ll come too,” Ceniro said. “Even if I’m out in the middle of nowhere.”

Lyn’s expression lightened a little, and she gave them a melancholy little grateful smile. “Everyone… Thank you.”

A girl’s cry echoed through the forest. Lyn spun, her hand going to her sword. “There are bandits ahead now!”

“We must help their victim,” Kent said. “Ceniro?” Ceniro had had a battle to get the knights to stop calling him ‘sir’, but he had won out in the end and felt better for it. In return, they had also easily allowed him to call them by their names without titles or honorifics, which was something that he had always forgotten about far too easily. Lyn, unfortunately for her, had lost a similar battle, and both knights insisted on calling her ‘Lady’, and Kent still wasn’t convinced it was fine to call her ‘Lyn’ instead of ‘Lyndis’.

“We need to find out what’s going on, first,” Ceniro said, quickening his pace. “I can’t see anything from here.”

“Is that…” Lyn ran forward, past the tactician, off the road and through the forest. “That’s a pegasus!”

“A pegasus?” Ceniro asked, his face brightening.

“You like pegasus knights?” Sain asked with a wink.

“I never worked with a pegasus knight before, not even in training. I admire them, though.”

“It is!” Lyn cried. “And… Florina!”

So much for surprise, but he could work around it. At Lyn’s cry, the pegasus rider turned towards their rapidly approaching group with a cry of joy, pulling away from the thugs who had a tight grip on her slender wrists. “Lyn!”

Lyn ran to her, heedless of the danger of the men, and hugged the girl tightly. “Florina, what are you doing in this place?”

Florina sniffled, clinging to Lyn. Her eyes were hidden behind a curtain of tumbled lavender hair, but her cheeks and nose were still red from crying. “I… I was coming to visit you, after your mom… but then I heard you left Sacae with three strangers, and I was worried, so I… I-I landed here to see if anyone had seen you, but I…”

“She stepped on my friend here, and she’s going to pay!” one of the thugs announced, holding out a fist threateningly towards Lyn.

“Don’t be absurd,” Lyn said, irritated and showing absolutely no fear. “Can’t you just let a little accident go? I know Florina, and she’s probably apologized many times already.”

“Many times,” Florina said. “But they wouldn’t listen!”

“That’s not good enough! Who’s going to pay for his doctor’s bills, hmm? She owes us, so she’s coming with us!”

Lyn’s face darkened. “You’re not Taliver, are you?”

“What? No! Those ones will even kill women and children.”

“Crazy, I tell you,” said the other thug mournfully. “Absolutely crazy. Such a waste.”

“But I’ll tell you what. We’ll let your cute friend go if you come with us instead.” The first thug let a heavy hand fall on Lyn’s shoulder.

“Unhand Lady Lyndis!” Kent demanded, drawing his sword.

“Let me go or I’ll gut you on the spot,” Lyn hissed.

“Fine, we’ll capture you fair and square. Deal?” The thugs ran off.

“They’ll be back in a moment, undoubtedly,” Lyn said. “They’ve just gone to get reinforcements. Do we run, or fight?”

“We fight, of course!” Sain said. “A lady’s honour has been insulted! We must make sure they never do that again!” Kent nodded slowly.

“I was hoping you’d say that,” Lyn said. “Ceniro? What do you think?”

“We can fight them,” Ceniro said calmly. “This might be tricky to co-ordinate, but I guess I don’t have to get too fancy out here.”

“Can you fight, Florina?”

Florina hesitated for a moment, seemingly having an internal debate with herself. Then she rubbed her eyes, patted her cheeks in a bracing manner, and turned to her pegasus, retrieving a long, slender spear. “…Y-yes, I can fight. But, Lyn, who are all these… men?”

“This person is Ceniro, and he’s a tactician whom I just met one day. He’s very nice, and he’ll give you good directions, so you don’t have to worry about him. These are Kent and Sain, and I’ll explain why I’m with them later.” She turned to Ceniro. “I… know it’s another thing to ask, but we should warn these hamlets that we’re fighting. We don’t want the bandits to take advantage of the confusion and destroy anything else.”

“All right. Florina, that will be your first job. The bandits look like they’ll be coming from the northwest, so Lyn, Kent, Sain, we’ll head that way. I’ll give you more detailed instructions in a moment. Florina, I want you to warn those houses about this battle, and then fly up and tell me where the enemies are and what kind of weapons they have, if you can see them.”

“G-g-got it!” She swung onto the back of her pegasus and with a whoosh of wings, she was off.

A few minutes later, Ceniro heard her scream, and swung around. “Kent-”

“It’s all right,” Lyn said, though she had started and almost taken off running. “She’s not in physical danger, just startled.”

“Old friend of yours?” Sain asked.

“We grew up together. Her mother was too weak to birth and raise her in Ilia, so they stayed with my family when I was small, and we stayed in touch afterwards.”

Bushes rustled behind them, and they spun around again, to be greeted by a young man with a cheerful grin and a bow on his back. “Hey! The nice girl said you’re fighting the bandits?”

“We are,” Kent said. “Who are you?”

“My name’s Wil. I’m an archer, um, obviously, and I want to help! These guys have been a real pain and I can’t get home to Lycia until they stop it.”

“That explains why she was startled,” Lyn murmured to Ceniro. “She’s shy of men, but she’s always afraid of people with bows. She’s afraid they’ll shoot her pegasus out of the air, even if she knows they’re friendly people.”

“Ooh, I see,” Wil said. “I’m really sorry about that. I’ll try and keep out of her way.”

“In any case, welcome to the fight, Wil,” Ceniro said. “We’re actually waiting for it to get going, and we are attacking uphill… Never fun.”

“Totally agree,” Wil said, unslinging his bow from his back. “So who’s in charge?”

“He is,” Lyn said, pointing at Ceniro. “This is Ceniro, our tactician. My name’s Lyn. This is Kent and Sain.”

Ceniro looked to the air, and Florina swooped down to land beside them. “Th-they’re coming… I think it was four people with axes, three people with swords, and an a-a-archer.” She saw Wil and started, and Wil gave her a friendly wave.

Ceniro squinted up the hill. “The bushes are too thick for me to really see, but here’s what we’re going to do…”

 

“So Florina,” Lyn said once the bandits had either been killed or retreated, “what brought you to visit me?”

“Well… you remember the knighting ceremony of the Pegasus Knights of Ilia?” Florina chirped, completely happy now that the danger was over.

“Vaguely,” Lyn said. “You’ve been knighted? Congratulations! That’s wonderful.”

“Um, so you see, I’m supposed to join a group of mercenaries for further training. So, I… um… I wanted to get your advice first.”

“Hm, but Florina, most groups of mercenaries are men, aren’t they? I can’t imagine you’d be at all comfortable with any of them. Why can’t they just put you in one of the Wings?”

“The Wings are for knights who’ve proven themselves already, though,” Florina said. “It’s to ensure that anyone hiring a knight from a Wing gets proven quality.” She lowered her head. “I… I just thought I’d be able to work it out somehow…”

“Beautiful Florina!” Sain cried, throwing his arms wide. She squeaked and hid behind Lyn. “Why not join us? Lyndis’s Legion is a fine group of mercenaries with the addition of Wil here, are we not?”

“Wait, did you just include me?” Wil asked hopefully.

Kent smacked his palm into his face. “Sain, Sain, Sain…”

“Yes, do you need me for anything?” Sain said impudently. “What do you say, sweet Florina? You can travel with your friend Lyn and do your training under a master tactician!”

“That’s laying it on a bit thick,” Ceniro mumbled, blushing.

“I-I would like that,” Florina said to Lyn.

Lyn chuckled. “All right. I’m glad to have you with me, Florina. Wil, sorry for dragging you into this.”

“It’s no problem,” Wil said, smiling easily. “I mean, you’re going to Lycia too, right? I’d be totally happy to join, ah, Lyndis’s Legion and get safely through the rest of Bern.”

“Both of you are very welcome,” Kent said earnestly.

“So, um, what are you guys going to Lycia for, anyway?” Wil asked.

“It’s a bit of a story,” Sain said.

“Which you are not going to tell,” Kent interrupted. “Lady Lyndis?”

 

Chapter 1: A Family’s Call     Chapter 3: Bandits’ Pride

Rekka no Ken: Chapter 1: A Family’s Call

EDIT: Ceniro’s a lot more shy this time around, isn’t he? My friend’s making me watch Oh My Goddess for references and it’s kind of great. : D Completely rewriting the battles because frankly they’re 3/4 of the problem with this old version. I was relying too much on the game before.

Friendly reminder that Ceniro’s name is pronounced ‘kehneero’ because it’s actually Quenya. : P

 

Prologue: A Girl From the Plains     Chapter 2: Lyndis’s Legion

 

Chapter 1: A Family’s Call

 

Lyn tried to make him take the bed that night, but he mustered up enough backbone to insist on sleeping on the floor, which wasn’t that uncomfortable with all the rugs it was made of. He didn’t know her at all, but she seemed a little distracted the rest of the day.

At breakfast the next morning, she ate quickly, stared into her tea for a few seconds, then clapped her hands together and nodded decisively. “All right!”

“Huh?” Ceniro blurted out, almost dropping food out of his mouth. Continue reading

Rekka no Ken: Prologue: A Girl From the Plains

The first story translated into English and my tactician Ceniro collide in an unfinished half-scripted novelization.

EDIT: I first published these chapters in 2007. Having gone back to them in preparation for writing Anima’s Seal this NaNoWriMo in 2015, I no longer feel this first volume stands up and I feel no regret over completely rewriting it without leaving a copy of the original on my blog (that no one reads anyway : D). And hey, it’s kind of refreshing to be able to write chapters that are under 5 pages long, can you believe it??

EDIT2: based on feedback from my beta reader and the fact that I can’t sleep, I’m editing this fic so that it sucks less.

 

Chapter 1: A Family’s Call

 

Prologue: A Girl From the Plains

 

The young man walked steadily on his way, striding through the knee-deep yellow grasses of the Sacaean plains. He was rather short, and his pace was unhurried. The sun beat on his pale-green cloaked back, and suddenly he looked around and narrowed his grey eyes.

He was being followed.

He gripped his staff tighter and continued on. Continue reading